MEET JOHN DOE

                                  screenplay
                               by Robert Riskin

                             based on a story by
                      Richard Connell and Robert Presnell







                                                 Shooting Draft, 1941

               Property of
               Warner Brothers



               FADE IN:

               EXT. BULLETIN OFFICE - SIDEWALK

               CLOSE-UP: Of a time-worn plaque against the side of a 
               building. It reads:

                                     THE BULLETIN
                         "A free press for a free people."

               While we read this, a pair of hands come in holding 
               pneumatic chisel which immediately attacks the sign. As 
               the lettering is being obliterated,

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               CLOSE-UP: A new plaque on which the lettering has been 
               changed to: THE NEW BULLETIN "A streamlined newspaper for 
               a streamlined era."

                                                                 CUT TO:

               INT. BULLETIN OUTER OFFICE. 

               MED. SHOT: At a door at which a sign-painter works. He is 
               painting HENRY CONNELL's name on the door. It opens and a 
               flip office boy emerges. The painter has to wait until the 
               door closes in order to resume his work.

               FULL SHOT: Of the outer office. The activity of the office 
               seems to suddenly cease, as all eyes are centered on the 
               office boy.

               MED. SHOT—PANNING: With the office boy—who has a small 
               sheet of paper in his hand. He walks jauntily to a desk, 
               refers to his paper, points his finger to a woman, emits a 
               short whistle through his teeth, runs a finger across his 
               throat and jerks his thumb toward managing editor's office. 
               The woman stares starkly at him while her immediate 
               neighbors look on with sympathy. The office boy now goes 
               through the same procedure with several other people. All 
               watch him, terror written in their eyes.

               MED. SHOT: Toward CONNELL's office door where painter works. 
               It opens and three people emerge. Two men and a girl. The 
               girl is young and pretty. All three look dourful. The 
               painter again has to wait for the door to shut before 
               resuming his work. The two men exit. The girl suddenly 
               stops.

               CLOSE SHOT: Of the girl. Her name is ANN MITCHELL. She 
               stands, thinking, and then suddenly, impulsively, wheels 
               around. CAMERA PANS with her as she returns to CONNELL's 
               office door, flings it open and disappears. The painter 
               remains poised with his brush, waiting for the door to 
               swing back. There is a slight flash of resentment in his 
               eyes.

               INT. CONNELL'S OFFICE

               FULL SHOT: CONNELL is behind his desk on which is a tray 
               of sandwiches and a glass of milk, half gone. Near him 
               sits POP DWYER, another veteran newspaperman. ANN crosses 
               to CONNELL's desk.

                                     CONNELL
                              (on phone)
                         Yeh, D. B. Oh, just cleaning out 
                         the dead-wood. Okay.

                                     ANN
                              (supplicatingly)
                         Look, Mr. Connell . . . I just 
                         can't afford to be without work 
                         right now, not even for a day. 
                         I've got a mother and two kid 
                         sisters to . . .

               Secretary enters. (Her name is Mattie.)

                                     SECRETARY
                         More good luck telegrams.

                                     ANN
                         Well, you know how it is, I, I've 
                         just got to keep working. See?

                                     CONNELL
                         Sorry, sister. I was sent down 
                         here to clean house. I told yuh I 
                         can't use your column any more. 
                         It's lavender and old lace!
                              (flicks dictograph 
                              button)

                                     MATTIE
                              (over dictograph)
                         Yeah?

                                     CONNELL
                         Send those other people in.

                                     MATTIE
                              (over dictograph)
                         Okay.

                                     ANN
                         I'll tell you what I'll do. I get 
                         thirty dollars a week. I'll take 
                         twenty-five, twenty if necessary. 
                         I'll do anything you say.

                                     CONNELL
                         It isn't the money. We're after 
                         circulation. What we need is 
                         fireworks. People who can hit with 
                         sledge hammers—start arguments.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, I can do that. I know this 
                         town inside out. Oh, give me a 
                         chance, please.

               She can get no further, for several people enter. They are 
               cowed and frightened. ANN hesitates a moment, then, there 
               being nothing for her to do, she starts to exit. She is 
               stopped by CONNELL's voice.

                                     CONNELL
                         All right, come in, come in! Come 
                         in!
                              (to Ann)
                         Cashier's got your check.
                              (back to others)
                         Who are these people? Gibbs, 
                         Frowley, Cunningham, Jiles—
                              (to Ann at door)
                         Hey, you, sister!

               Ann turns.

                                     CONNELL
                         Don't forget to get out your last 
                         column before you pick up your 
                         check!

               ANN's eyes flash angrily as she exits.

               INT. OUTER OFFICE. 

               MED. SHOT: ANN storms out. The painter again has to wait 
               for the door to swing back to him.

               INT. ANN'S OFFICE.

               FULL SHOT: ANN enters her office and paces around, furious. 
               A man in alpaca sleeve-bands enters. His name is JOE.

                                     JOE
                         You're a couple o' sticks shy in 
                         your column, Ann.

                                     ANN
                              (ignores him, 
                              muttering . . .)
                         A big, rich slob like D. B. Norton 
                         buys a paper—and forty heads are 
                         chopped off!

                                     JOE
                         Did you get it, too?

                                     ANN
                         Yeah. You, too? Oh, Joe . . . oh, 
                         I'm sorry darling . . . why don't 
                         we tear the building down!

                                     JOE
                         Before you do, Ann, perhaps you'd 
                         better finish this column.

                                     ANN
                         Yeah. Lavender and old lace!

               Suddenly she stops pacing. Her eyes widen as a fiendish 
               idea strikes her.

                                     ANN
                         Wait, Joe—wait!

               She flops down in front of her typewriter.

                                     ANN
                              (muttering)
                         Wants fireworks, huh? Okay!

               She begins to pound furiously, her jaw set.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANN. Eyes flashing as she types.

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOE, watching her. The wild look in her eye 
               and the unnatural speed of her typing causes him to stare 
               dumbly at her.

               MED. SHOT: ANN bangs away madly. Finally she finishes. She 
               whips the sheet out of the typewriter, hands it to JOE.

                                     ANN
                         Here.

               As JOE takes it, ANN begins to empty the drawers of her 
               desk.

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOE reading what ANN has written.

                                     JOE
                              (reading)
                         "Below is a letter which reached 
                         my desk this morning. It's a 
                         commentary on what we laughingly 
                         call the civilized world. 'Dear 
                         Miss Mitchell: Four years ago I 
                         was fired out of my job. Since 
                         then I haven't been able to get 
                         another one. At first I was sore 
                         at the state administration because 
                         it's on account of the slimy 
                         politics here we have all this 
                         unemployment. But in looking around, 
                         it seems the whole world's going 
                         to pot, so in protest I'm going to 
                         commit suicide by jumping off the 
                         City Hall roof!' Signed, A disgusted 
                         American citizen, John Doe.'"

               JOE pauses to absorb this.

                                     JOE
                              (continues reading)
                         "Editor's note . . . If you ask 
                         this column, the wrong people are 
                         jumping off roofs."

               JOE glances up toward ANN, in mild protest.

                                     JOE
                         Hey, Ann, this is the old fakeroo, 
                         isn't it?

               FULL SHOT: ANN has just about accumulated all her things. 
               JOE stares at her, knowing it's a fake.

                                     ANN
                         Never mind that, Joe. Go ahead.

               JOE shrugs, shakes his head, and exits. ANN stuffs her 
               things under her arm and also goes.

               INT. OUTER OFFICE

               MED. SHOT: Voices ad lib—"Awfully sorry you're not going." 
               "Good-bye." (Laughing)

               ANN comes out. Suddenly, she stops, gets another idea, 
               picks up a book from a desk, and reaches back to heave it.

               MED. SHOT: At CONNELL's office door. The sign-painter has 
               just finished CONNELL's name, and as he leans back, pleased, 
               wiping his brushes, the book flies in. The painter lifts 
               his head slowly, his wrath too great to find utterance.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. GOVERNOR JACKSON'S OFFICE

               CLOSE-UP: Of two of GOVERNOR'S ASSOCIATES.

                                     MAN
                              (reading newspaper)
                         " . . . and it's because of the 
                         slimy politics that we have all 
                         this unemployment here."
                              (agitated)
                         There it is! That's D. B. Norton's 
                         opening attack on the Governor!

                                     2ND MAN
                         Why Jim, it's just a letter sent 
                         in to a column.

                                     JIM
                         No, no. I can smell it. That's 
                         Norton!

               While he speaks, the GOVERNOR has entered.

                                     GOVERNOR
                         Good morning, gentlemen. You're 
                         rather early.

                                     MEN
                         'Morning. 'Morning, Governor.

                                     GOVERNOR
                         You're here rather early.

                                     JIM
                              (pushes paper over 
                              to him)
                         Did you happen to see this in the 
                         New Bulletin, Governor?

               He emphasizes the word "new" cynically.

                                     GOVERNOR
                         Yes. I had it served with my 
                         breakfast this morning.

                                     2ND MAN
                         Jim thinks it's D. B. Norton at 
                         work.

                                     JIM
                         Of course it is!

                                     GOVERNOR
                         Oh, come, Jim. That little item? 
                         D. B. Norton does things in a much 
                         bigger way . . .

                                     JIM
                         This is his opening attack on you, 
                         Governor! Take my word for it! 
                         What did he buy a paper for?  Why 
                         did he hire a high-pressure editor 
                         like Connell for? He's in the oil 
                         business! I tell you, Governor, 
                         he's after your scalp!

                                     GOVERNOR
                         All right, Jim. Don't burst a blood 
                         vessel, I'll attend to it.
                              (flips button on 
                              dictograph)
                         Get me Spencer of the Daily 
                         Chronicle , please.

                                                            DISSOLVE TO:

               INT. SPENCER'S OFFICE

               MED. SHOT: SPENCER is on the telephone

                                     SPENCER
                         Yes. Yes. I saw it, Governor . . . 
                         and if you ask me that's a phoney 
                         letter. Why, that gag has got 
                         whiskers on it. Huh?  Okay, I'll 
                         get the Mayor and maybe the Chamber 
                         of Commerce to go after them.
                              (into dictagraph)
                         Get Mayor Lovett on the phone!

               INT. MAYOR'S OFFICE

               MED. SHOT: Of MAYOR's secretary.

                                     SECRETARY
                              (picking up phone)
                         Hello? Sorry, the Mayor's busy on 
                         the other phone.

               CAMERA PANS over to the MAYOR who is fatuous and excitable.

                                     MAYOR
                              (into telephone)
                         Yes, I know, Mrs. Brewster. It's a 
                         terrible reflection on our city. 
                         I've had a dozen calls already.

               SECRETARY enters scene.

                                     SECRETARY
                         Spencer of the Chronicle .

                                     MAYOR
                         Hold him.
                              (into phone)
                         Yes, Mrs. Brewster, I'm listening.

               The SECRETARY lays down the receiver.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. CORNER OF A BEDROOM 

               CLOSE SHOT: Of MRS. BREWSTER—stout and loud. She is propped 
               up in bed—a breakfast tray on her lap—the newspaper by her 
               side.

                                     MRS. BREWSTER
                         Insist that this John Doe man be 
                         found and given a job at once. If 
                         something isn't done. I'll call 
                         out the whole Auxiliary — yes, and 
                         the Junior Auxiliary, too. We'll 
                         hold a meeting and see—

                                                                 CUT TO:

               INT. MAYOR'S OFFICE

               MED. SHOT: Of MAYOR. He lays the receiver down and we 
               continue to hear MRS. BREWSTER's voice. MAYOR picks up 
               SPENCER's phone.

                                     MAYOR
                         Yes, Spencer. Who? The Governor? 
                         Well, what about me? it's my 
                         building he's jumping off of! And 
                         I'm up for re-election, too!

                                     SECRETARY
                         Shh!

                                     MAYOR
                              (to Secretary)
                         What are you doing? Get Connell at 
                         the Bulletin !
                              (to Spencer)
                         Why, he's liable to go right past 
                         my window,
                              (suddenly—to 
                              Sec'y—excitably)
                         What was that?!

                                     SECRETARY
                         What?

                                     MAYOR
                         Out the window! Something just 
                         flew by!

                                     SECRETARY
                         I didn't see anything.

                                     MAYOR
                              (semi-hysterical)
                         Well, don't stand there, you idiot. 
                         Go and look. Open the window. Oh, 
                         why did he have to pick on my 
                         building?

               The SECRETARY, telephone in hand, peers out window.

                                     MAYOR
                         Is there a crowd in the street?

                                     SECRETARY
                         No, sir.

                                     MAYOR
                         Then he may be caught on a ledge! 
                         Look again!

                                     SECRETARY
                         I think it must have been a sea-
                         gull.

                                     MAYOR
                         A sea-gull? What's a sea-gull doing 
                         around the city hall? That's a bad 
                         omen, isn't it?
                              (picks up Mrs. 
                              Brewster's phone)

                                     SECRETARY
                         Oh, n-no, sir. The sea-gull is a 
                         lovely bird.

                                     MAYOR
                              (into telephone)
                         I-it's all right, Mrs. Brewster. 
                         It was just a sea-gull.
                              (catches himself)
                         Er. nothing's happened yet! No, 
                         I'm watching. Don't worry. Ju-just 
                         leave it all to me!

               The SECRETARY holds out another phone. The MAYOR drops 
               MRS. BREWSTER's phone again, and her voice is still heard.

                                     MAYOR
                              (into Spencer's 
                              phone)
                         Spencer, I'll call you back.

               Secretary has gotten CONNELL on the phone—hands phone to 
               MAYOR.

                                     MAYOR
                         Hello! Connell! This is—

                                     (TO SECRETARY)
                         What are you doing?
                              (back to phone)
                         This is the Mayor.

               INT. CONNELL'S OFFICE

               FULL SHOT: CONNELL is on the phone. POP DWYER is draped in 
               a chair nearby.

                                     CONNELL
                         Yes, Mayor Lovett! How many times 
                         are you gonna call me?  I've got 
                         everybody and his brother and sister 
                         out looking for him. Did you see 
                         the box I'm running?

               He picks up the front page of the Bulletin; we see a four 
               column box on the front page.

                                     CONNELL
                              (reading)
                         "An appeal to John Doe. 'Think it 
                         over, John. Life can be beautiful,' 
                         says Mayor. 'If you need a job, 
                         apply to the editor of this paper 
                         . . .'" " and so forth and so forth 
                         . . . Okay, Mayor. I'll let you 
                         know as soon as I have something! 
                         What? . . . Well, pull down the 
                         blinds!
                              (he hangs up)

               The door opens and a man enters. His name is BEANY. Walks 
               fast, talks fast and accomplishes nothing. Outside, we see 
               the painter trying once more to get his sign painted. He 
               reaches in—and pulls the door to.

                                     BEANY
                         I went up to Miss Mitchell's house, 
                         boss. Boy, she's in a bad way.

                                     CONNELL
                         Where is she?

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, do you know something? She 
                         supports a mother and two kids. 
                         What do you know about that?

                                     CONNELL
                              (controlling his 
                              patience)
                         Did you find her?

                                     BEANY
                         No. Her mother's awful worried 
                         about her. When she left the house 
                         she said she was going on a roaring 
                         drunk. Er, the girl, I mean!

                                     CONNELL
                              (barking)
                         Go out and find her!

                                     BEANY
                         Sure. Hey, but the biggest thing I 
                         didn't tell you . . .

               CONNELL picks up telephone.

                                     CONNELL
                         Hello! . . . Yeh?

                                     BEANY
                         Her old man was Doc Mitchell. You 
                         know, the doc that saved my mother's 
                         life and wouldn't take any money 
                         for it? You remember that? Okay, 
                         boss, I'll go and look for her.

               BEANY exits, knocking over an ash-stand.

                                     CONNELL
                              (into phone)
                         Holy smokes, Commissioner. You've 
                         had twenty-four hours! Okay, 
                         Hawkshaw, grab a pencil. Here it 
                         is again. She's about five foot 
                         five, brown eyes, light chestnut 
                         hair and as fine a pair of legs as 
                         . . .

               The door opens, ANN stands there—CONNELL sees her.

                                     CONNELL
                              (into phone—staring 
                              at Ann)
                         . . . ever walked into this office.

               Med. Shot: At door. The sign painter is slowly beginning 
               to lose patience. He again reaches in—pulls the door 
               shut—glaring at ANN.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANN.

                                     ANN
                              (innocently)
                         Did you want to see me?

               WIDER SHOT: CONNELL, without moving, stares at her.

                                     CONNELL
                              (quietly—sizzling)
                         No. I've had the whole army and 
                         navy searching for you because 
                         that's a game we play here every 
                         day.

                                     ANN
                         I remember, distinctly, being fired.

                                     CONNELL
                         That's right. But you have a piece 
                         of property that still belongs to 
                         this newspaper. And I'd like to 
                         have it!

                                     ANN
                         What's that?

                                     CONNELL
                         The letter.

                                     ANN
                         What letter?

                                     CONNELL
                         The letter from John Doe.

                                     ANN
                         Oh!

                                     CONNELL
                         The whole town's in an uproar. 
                         We've got to find him. The letter's 
                         our only clue.

                                     ANN
                              (simply)
                         There is no letter.

                                     CONNELL
                         We'll get a handwriting expert to—
                              (suddenly realizes 
                              what she has said)
                         What!

                                     ANN
                         There is no letter.

               He stares at her for a moment, flabbergasted—exchanges a 
               look with POP—crosses to the back door—shuts it—then comes 
               back to face her.

               CLOSE SHOT: - ANN and CONNELL.

                                     CONNELL
                         Say that again.

                                     ANN
                         There is no letter. I made it up.

               CONNELL looks at her a long moment and then up at POP.

                                     CONNELL
                              (repeating dully)
                         You made it up.

                                     ANN
                         Uh-huh. You said you wanted 
                         fireworks.

               WIDER SHOT: As he recovers from the shock, and then wheels 
               on ANN again.

                                     CONNELL
                         Don't you know there are nine jobs 
                         waiting for this guy?  Twenty-two 
                         families want to board him free?  
                         Five women want to marry him, and 
                         the Mayor's practically ready to 
                         adopt him? And you . . .

               As CONNELL glares at her the door springs open and BEANY 
               enters.

                                     BEANY
                         just called the morgue, boss. They 
                         say there's a girl there—

                                     CONNELL
                         Shut up!

               CLOSE-UP: Of BEANY. He is startled by this—and then stares 
               popeyed as he sees ANN.

                                     BEANY
                         Ann! Say, why didn't yuh—

                                     CONNELL
                         Beany!

               Med. Shot: At the door. The painter is beginning to grind 
               his teeth. He pulls the door shut, viciously.

               WIDER SHOT: To include all.

                                     POP
                         Only one thing to do, Hank. Drop 
                         the whole business quickly.

                                     CONNELL
                         How?

                                     POP
                         Run a story. Say John Doe was in 
                         here, and is sorry he wrote the 
                         letter and—

                                     CONNELL
                              (jumps in quickly)
                         That's right. You got it! Sure! He 
                         came in here and I made him change 
                         his mind. "Bulletin editor saves 
                         John Doe's life." Why, it's perfect. 
                         I'll have Ned write it up.
                              (into dictograph)
                         Oh, Ned!

                                     NED'S VOICE
                         Yeah?

                                     CONNELL
                         got a story I want yuh to—

                                     ANN
                         Wait a minute!

               She rushes over—snaps the dictograph off.

               MED. SHOT: Of ANN, leaning on CONNELL's desk.

                                     ANN
                         Listen, you great big wonderful 
                         genius of a newspaperman! You came 
                         down here to shoot some life into 
                         this dying paper, didn't you?

               CONNELL blinks under the attack. POP and BEANY move into 
               the scene.

                                     ANN
                         Well, the whole town's curious 
                         about John Doe and, boom, just 
                         like that you're going to bury 
                         him. There's enough circulation in 
                         that man to start a shortage in 
                         the ink market!

                                     CONNELL
                              (thoroughly 
                              bewildered)
                         In what man!

                                     ANN
                         John Doe.

                                     CONNELL
                         What John Doe?

                                     ANN
                         Our John Doe! The one I made up!  
                         Look, genius— Now, look. Suppose 
                         there was a John Doe—and he walked 
                         into this office. What would you 
                         do? Find him a job and forget about 
                         the whole business, I suppose! Not 
                         me! I'd have made a deal with him!

                                     CONNELL
                         A deal?

                                     ANN
                         Sure!  When you get hold of a stunt 
                         that sells papers you don't drop 
                         it like a hot potato. Why, this is 
                         good for at least a couple of 
                         months. You know what I'd do?  
                         Between now and let's say, 
                         Christmas, when he's gonna jump, 
                         I'd run a daily yarn starting with 
                         his boyhood, his schooling, his 
                         first job!  A wide-eyed youngster 
                         facing a chaotic world. The problem 
                         of the average man, of all the 
                         John Does in the world.

               TWO SHOT: ANN and CONNELL. Despite himself, he's interested 
               in her recital.

                                     ANN
                         Now, then comes the drama. He meets 
                         discouragement. He finds the world 
                         has feet of clay. His ideals 
                         crumble. So what does he do?  He 
                         decides to commit suicide in protest 
                         against the state of civilization. 
                         He thinks of the river!  But no, 
                         no, he has a better idea. The City 
                         Hall. Why?  Because he wants to 
                         attract attention. He wants to get 
                         a few things off his chest, and 
                         that's the only way he can get 
                         himself heard.

                                     CONNELL
                         So?

               FULL SHOT: Of the whole group. BEANY grins in admiration. 
               CONNELL has leaned back in his chair, his eyes glued on 
               ANN.

                                     ANN
                         So!  So he writes me a letter and 
                         I dig him up. He pours out his 
                         soul to me, and from now on we 
                         quote: "I protest, by John Doe."  
                         He protests against all the evils 
                         in the world; the greed, the lust, 
                         the hate, the fear, all of man's 
                         inhumanity to man.

               Arguments will start. Should he commit suicide or should 
               he not! People will write in pleading with him. But no! 
               No, sir! John Doe will remain adamant!  On Christmas Eve, 
               hot or cold, he goes! See?

               She finishes, takes a deep breath—awed, and at the same 
               time proud of her accomplishment.

               CLOSE SHOT: Of CONNELL. He just stares at ANN.

                                     CONNELL
                              (after a 
                              pause—quietly)
                         Very pretty. Very pretty, indeed, 
                         Miss Mitchell. But would you mind 
                         telling me who goes on Christmas 
                         Eve?

                                     ANN
                         John Doe.

                                     CONNELL
                              (loses 
                              control—screams)
                         What John Doe?

                                     ANN
                              (screams right back)
                         The one we hire for the job, you 
                         lunkhead!

               There is silence for a moment.

                                     CONNELL
                              (breaking 
                              silence—speaks 
                              with a controlled 
                              patience)
                         Wait a minute. Wait a minute. Lemme 
                         get this through this lame brain 
                         of mine. Are you suggesting we go 
                         out and hire someone to say he's 
                         gonna commit suicide on Christmas 
                         Eve? Is that it?

                                     ANN
                              (nodding)
                         Well, you're catching on.

                                     CONNELL
                         Who, for instance?

                                     ANN
                         Anybody! Er, er—Beany'll do!

               CLOSE-UP: BEANY. He is petrified.

                                     BEANY
                         Why sure—Who? Me? Jump off a—Oh, 
                         no! Any time but Christmas. I'm 
                         superstitious.

               FULL SHOT: BEANY backs away from them—and when he gets to 
               the door—makes a dash for it.

               INT. OUTER OFFICE

               MED. SHOT: At door. As BEANY comes dashing out, he almost 
               upsets the painter from the stool. When the door is shut, 
               the name of "Connell" which he has been printing is all 
               smudged over. The painter stares at it, helplessly for a 
               second, and then—unable to stand it any more, rises, throws 
               his brush violently to the floor—after completely smearing 
               the sign himself.

               FULL SHOT:

                                     CONNELL
                              (sighing)
                         Miss Mitchell, do me a favor, will 
                         you? Go on out and get married and 
                         have a lot o' babies—but stay out 
                         o' newspaper business!

                                     POP
                         Better get that story in, Hank, 
                         it's getting late.

                                     ANN
                              (to CONNELL)
                         You're supposed to be a smart guy!  
                         If it was raining hundred dollar 
                         bills, you'd be out looking for a 
                         dime you lost some place.

                                     CONNELL
                         Holy smokes! Wasting my time 
                         listening to this mad woman.

               He crosses to his desk just as NED enters from the back 
               door.

                                     NED
                         Look, Chief! Look what the Chronicle 
                         is running on John Doe. They say 
                         it's a fake!

               CONNELL turns sharply.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANN. She was just about giving up, when she 
               hears this—and her eyes brighten alertly.

               MED. SHOT: At CONNELL's desk. CONNELL—reading the 
               paper—becomes incensed.

                                     CONNELL
                         Why, the no-good—low-down—
                              (reading)
                         "John Doe story amateur journalism. 
                         It's palpably phoney. It's a wonder 
                         anyone is taking it seriously." 
                         What do yuh think of those guys!

               ANN has walked into scene while CONNELL is reading.

                                     ANN
                         That's fine! That's fine!  Now 
                         fall right into their laps. Go 
                         ahead. Say John Doe walked in and 
                         called the whole thing off. You 
                         know what that's going to sound 
                         like on top of this!

                                     CONNELL
                              (doesn't like Ned 
                              hearing all this)
                         That's all, Ned. Thank you.

                                     NED
                         All right.

               NED, puzzled, exits. CONNELL comes away from his desk and 
               walks around.

                                     CONNELL
                              (fighting spirit)
                         "Amateur journalism", huh? Why, 
                         the bunch of sophomores! I can 
                         teach them more about—

               But he is interrupted by the front door being flung open. 
               On the threshold stands BEANY.

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, boss. Get a load of this.

                                     CONNELL
                              (joins him in the 
                              doorway)
                         What?

                                     BEANY
                         Look!

               MED. SHOT: - OVER THEIR SHOULDERS.  In the outer office 
               are a large group of derelict-looking men. Some 
               standing—some sitting—some leaning. It looks like the lobby 
               of a flophouse had been transplanted.

               CLOSE SHOT: Beany and Connell.

                                     CONNELL
                         What do they want?

                                     BEANY
                         They all say they wrote the John 
                         Doe letter.

               MED. SHOT: POP and ANN have walked over and also peer out.

                                     CONNELL
                              (amused, turns)
                         Oh, they all wrote the letter?

               ANN pushes CONNELL aside—talks to BEANY.

                                     ANN
                         Tell them all to wait.

               She shuts the door and turns to CONNELL.

                                     ANN
                         Look, Mr. Connell—one of those men 
                         is your John Doe. They're desperate 
                         and will do anything for a cup of 
                         coffee. Pick one out and you can 
                         make the Chronicle eat their words.

               CLOSE-UP: Of CONNELL. A broad smile slowly spreads over 
               his face.

                                     CONNELL
                         I'm beginning to like this.

               MED.  SHOT: POP looks worried.

                                     POP
                         If you ask me, Hank, you're playing 
                         around with dynamite.

                                     CONNELL
                         No, no, no, the gal's right. We 
                         can't let the Chronicle get the 
                         laugh on us! We've got to produce 
                         a John Doe now.
                              (muttering)
                         Amateur journalism, huh!
                              (starts for door)
                         I'll show those guys.

                                     ANN
                         Sure—and there's no reason for 
                         them to find out the truth, either.
                              (significantly)
                         Because, naturally, I won't say 
                         anything.

               CONNELL turns sharply, stares at her a moment puzzled, 
               then grins.

                                     CONNELL
                              (grinning)
                         Okay, sister, you get your job 
                         back.

                                     ANN
                         Plus a bonus.

                                     CONNELL
                         What bonus?

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANN. She takes the plunge. She is a little 
               frightened at her own nerve, but she is going to brazen it 
               out.

                                     ANN
                              (tries to drop it 
                              casually)
                         Oh, the bonus of a thousand dollars 
                         the Chronicle was going to pay me 
                         for this little document. You'll 
                         find it says, er: "I, Ann Mitchell, 
                         hereby certify that the John Doe 
                         letter was created by me—"

               MED. SHOT: As she speaks, she gets the "little document" 
               out of her bag, hands it to CONNELL who glares at her, 
               takes the paper and starts to read. Ann leans over his 
               shoulder. POP peers over his other shoulder.

                                     CONNELL
                         I can read. I can read!

                                     ANN
                         Sorry.

               She backs away. CONNELL continues reading her confession.

                                     CONNELL
                         So you think this is worth a 
                         thousand dollars, do you?

                                     ANN
                              (very carelessly)
                         Oh, the Chronicle would consider 
                         it dirt cheap.

                                     CONNELL
                         Packs everything, including a gun.
                              (flings paper on 
                              desk)
                         Okay, sister, you've got yourself 
                         a deal. Now let's take a look at 
                         the candidates. The one we pick 
                         has gotta be the typical average 
                         man. Typical American that can 
                         keep his mouth shut.

                                     POP
                         Show me an American who can keep 
                         his mouth shut and—I'll eat him.

                                     CONNELL
                              (opens door)
                         Okay, Beany, bring 'em in one at a 
                         time.
                              (he steps back and 
                              rubs his hands in 
                              anticipation)
                         Wipe to: Montage: Half a dozen 
                         different types of hoboes appear—and 
                         in each instance ANN shakes her 
                         head, negatively.

                                                                WIPE TO:

               CLOSE SHOT: Of a TALL CHAP, head hanging shyly.

               TWO SHOT: Of ANN and CONNELL. They are impressed.

               FULL SHOT: ANN and CONNELL exchange hopeful glances and 
               begin slowly walking around the new candidate.

               CLOSE-UP: Of TALL CHAP. He feels awkward under this 
               scrutiny.

               WIDER SHOT: CONNELL stops in his examination of the man.

                                     CONNELL
                         Did you write that letter to Miss 
                         Mitchell?

                                     TALL CHAP
                              (after a pause)
                         No, I didn't.

               ANN, CONNELL and POP evince their surprise.

                                     CONNELL
                         What are you doing up here then?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Well, the paper said there were 
                         some jobs around loose. Thought 
                         there might be one left over.

               They study him for a second, then ANN walks over close to 
               him.

               TWO SHOT: ANN and TALL CHAP.

                                     ANN
                         Had any schooling?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Yeah, a little.

                                     ANN
                         What do you do when you work?

                                     TALL CHAP
                              (slight pause)
                         I used to pitch.

                                     ANN
                         Baseball?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Uh-huh. Till my wing[4] went bad.

                                     ANN
                         Where'd you play?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Bush leagues mostly.[5] Med. shot: 
                         To include the rest of them. They 
                         have their eyes glued on his face. 
                         ANN is very much interested.

                                     CONNELL
                         How about family? Got any family?

                                     TALL CHAP
                              (after a pause)
                         No.

                                     CONNELL
                         Oh, just traveling through, huh?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Yeah. Me and a friend of mine. 
                         He's outside.

               CONNELL nods to the others to join him in a huddle. He 
               crosses to a corner. They follow.

               CLOSE THREE SHOT: They speak in subdued voices.

                                     CONNELL
                         Looks all right—

                                     ANN
                         He's perfect! A baseball player. 
                         What could be more American!

                                     CONNELL
                         I wish he had a family, though.

                                     POP
                         Be less complicated without a 
                         family.

                                     ANN
                         Look at that face. It's wonderful. 
                         They'll believe him . Come on.

               CLOSE-UP: Of TALL CHAP. He is a strange, bewildered figure. 
               He knows he is being appraised, but doesn't know why. He 
               fingers his hat nervously and looks around the room. 
               Suddenly he is attracted by something.

               CLOSE-UP: Of tray of sandwiches on CONNELL's desk.

               CLOSE-UP: Of TALL CHAP. He swallows hard. His eyes stare 
               at the sandwiches hungrily.

               MED. SHOT: Over his shoulder. Shooting toward the huddling 
               group. It breaks up. They walk toward him.

               MED. SHOT: - ANOTHER ANGLE

                                     CONNELL
                         What's your name?

                                     TALL CHAP
                         Willoughby. John Willoughby, Long 
                         John Willoughby they called me in 
                         baseball.

                                     ANN
                         Er, would you, er, would you like 
                         to make some money?

                                     JOHN
                         Yeah, maybe.

               NOTE: Henceforth in this script he shall be referred to as 
               JOHN DOE.

                                     ANN
                         Would you be willing to say you 
                         wrote that letter—and stick by it?

                                     JOHN
                         Oh, I get the idea. Yeah, maybe.

               There is an appraising pause, and CONNELL again signals 
               them to join him in a huddle. They exit to their corner.

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN. His eyes immediately go to the 
               sandwiches.

               CLOSE-UP: Of tray, with sandwiches and milk, on desk.

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN. His eyes riveted on tray. He glances, 
               speculatively, over toward them and then back to the tray.

               MED. SHOT: Of the huddled group.

                                     ANN
                         That's our man. He's made to order.

                                     CONNELL
                         I don't know. He don't seem like a 
                         guy that'd fall into line.

                                     ANN
                              (it's significant 
                              to her)
                         When you're desperate for money, 
                         you do a lot of things, Mr. Connell. 
                         He's our man, I tell you.

               Suddenly, they are startled by a loud thud: they all look 
               around sharply.

                                     ANN
                         He's fainted! Get some water 
                         quickly!

               As all three rush to him.

                                     CONNELL
                         Hurry up, Pop.

                                     ANN
                         Oh.

                                     CONNELL
                              (to John)
                         Right here. Sit down.

                                     JOHN
                         Huh?

                                     ANN
                         Are you all right?

                                     JOHN
                         Yeah, I'm all right.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. ANN'S OFFICE. 

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN—sitting at ANN's desk, just completing a 
               meal—and still eating voraciously.

               CAMERA draws back and we find another bindle-stiff sitting 
               beside JOHN, packing food away in silence. He is the friend 
               JOHN referred to. He is much older and goes by the name of 
               COLONEL.

               CAMERA continues to PULL BACK revealing ANN who sits nearby, 
               watching them sympathetically.

               CLOSE SHOT: JOHN and the COLONEL. They continue eating. 
               JOHN glances up and catches ANN's eye. He smiles self-
               consciously.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANN. She, too, smiles warmly.

               MED. SHOT: They continue to eat silently.

                                     ANN
                         How many is that, six? Pretty 
                         hungry, weren't you?

                                     COLONEL
                         Say, all this John Doe business is 
                         batty, if yuh ask me.

                                     ANN
                         Well, nobody asked yuh.

                                     COLONEL
                         Trying to improve the world by 
                         jumping off buildings. You couldn't 
                         improve the world if the building 
                         jumped on you!

                                     JOHN
                              (to Ann)
                         Don't mind the Colonel. He hates 
                         people.

                                     ANN
                         He likes you well enough to stick 
                         around.

                                     JOHN
                         Oh, that's 'cause we both play 
                         doohickies. I met him in a box car 
                         a couple o' years ago. I was foolin' 
                         around with my harmonica and he 
                         comes over and joins in. I haven't 
                         been able to shake him since.

               FULL SHOT: SUDDENLY, he starts to play the overture from 
               "William Tell."  The COLONEL whips out an ocarina and joins 
               him. ANN stares, amused. The door opens and CONNELL and 
               BEANY barge in, followed by half a dozen photographers.

                                     CONNELL
                         All right, boys, here he is.

                                     ANN
                              (jumping up)
                         No, no, no! You can't take pictures 
                         of him like that—eating a 
                         sandwich—and with a beard!

               She waves the photographers out, and shuts the door.

                                     CONNELL
                         But, he's gonna jump off a building!

                                     ANN
                         Yes, but not because he's out of a 
                         job. That's not news! This man's 
                         going to jump as a matter of 
                         principle.

                                     CONNELL
                         Well, maybe you're right.

                                     ANN
                         We'll clean him up and put him in 
                         a hotel room—under bodyguards. 
                         We'll make a mystery out of him.
                              (suddenly)
                         Did you speak to Mr. Norton?

                                     CONNELL
                              (nods)
                         Thinks it's terrific. Says for us 
                         to go the limit. Wants us to build 
                         a bonfire under every big shot in 
                         the state.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, swell! Is that the contract?
                              (seeing paper in 
                              CONNELL's hand)

                                     CONNELL
                         Yes.
                              (sees the COLONEL)
                         What's he doing here?

                                     ANN
                         Friend of his. They play duets 
                         together.

                                     CONNELL
                         Duets? But can we trust him?

                                     ANN
                         Oh!

                                     JOHN
                         I trust him.

                                     CONNELL
                         Oh, you trust him, eh? Well, that's 
                         fine. I suppose he trusts you, 
                         too?

                                     ANN
                         Oh, stop worrying. He's all right.

                                     COLONEL
                              (insulted)
                         That's—

                                     CONNELL
                         Well, okay. But we don't want more 
                         than a couple o' hundred people in 
                         on this thing. Now the first thing 
                         I want is an exact copy of the 
                         John Doe letter in your own 
                         handwriting.

                                     ANN
                         I got it all ready. Here.

                                     CONNELL
                         Well, that's fine. Now I want you 
                         to sign this agreement. It gives 
                         us an exclusive story under your 
                         name day by day from now until 
                         Christmas. On December twenty-sixth, 
                         you get one railroad ticket out of 
                         town, and the Bulletin agrees to 
                         pay to have your arm fixed. That's 
                         what you want, isn't it?

                                     JOHN
                         Yeah, but it's got to be by Bone-
                         Setter Brown.

                                     CONNELL
                         Okay, Bone-Setter Brown goes. Here, 
                         sign it. Meanwhile, here's fifty 
                         dollars for spending money. That's 
                         fine. Beany!

                                     BEANY
                         Yeah, Boss?

                                     CONNELL
                         Take charge of him. Get him a suite 
                         at the Imperial and hire some 
                         bodyguards.

                                     ANN
                         Yeah, and some new clothes, Beany.

                                     BEANY
                         Do you think we better have him de-
                         loused?

                                     CONNELL
                         Yeah, yeah, yeah.

                                     BEANY
                         Both of 'em?

                                     CONNELL
                         Yes, both of 'em! But don't let 
                         him out of your sight.

                                     ANN
                         Hey, Beany, gray suit, huh?

                                     BEANY
                         Yeah.

                                     CONNELL
                         Okay, fellows.

                                     ANN
                         Take it easy, John Doe.

               JOHN and the COLONEL follow BEANY out.

                                     CONNELL
                              (turns to Ann)
                         And you! Start pounding that 
                         typewriter. Oh, boy! This is 
                         terrific!  No responsibilities on 
                         our part. Just statements from 
                         John Doe and we can blast our heads 
                         off.

                                     ANN
                              (interrupting)
                         Before you pop too many buttons, 
                         don't forget to make out that check 
                         for a thousand.

                                     CONNELL
                              (grimaces)
                         Awwwww!

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. LIVING-ROOM OF SUITE

               FULL SHOT: The door opens and BEANY enters. He is followed 
               by JOHN and the COLONEL. JOHN glances around, impressed. 
               The COLONEL looks glum.

               MED. SHOT: At door. As JOHN exits scene into the room, 
               tailed by the unhappy COLONEL. BEANY beckons someone out 
               in the corridor.

                                     BEANY
                         Okay, fellas.

               Three bruisers stand in the doorway.

                                     BEANY
                         Now, lemme see. You sit outside 
                         the door. Nobody comes in, see. 
                         You two fellas sit in here.

               AS THEY REACH FOR CHAIRS,

                                                                 CUT TO:

               MED. SHOT: JOHN is pleased as his gaze wanders around the 
               room

                                     JOHN
                         Hey, pretty nifty, huh?

                                     COLONEL
                         You ain't gonna get me to stay 
                         here.

                                     JOHN
                         Sure, you are.

                                     COLONEL
                         No, sir. That spot under the bridge 
                         where we slept last night's good 
                         enough for me.

               While he speaks, JOHN has managed to get a glimpse of 
               himself in a mirror—admiring his new suit.

                                     BELL HOP
                         Hey, what'll I do with this baggage?

                                     BEANY
                         Aw, stick 'em in the bedroom.

                                     COLONEL
                         Gimme mine. I ain't staying! You 
                         know we were headed for the Columbia 
                         River country before all this John 
                         Doe business came up. You remember 
                         that, don't yuh?

                                     JOHN
                         Sure. I remember . . . Say, did 
                         your ears pop coming up in the 
                         elevator? Mine did.

                                     COLONEL
                         Aw, Long John . . . I tell you—it's 
                         no good. You're gonna get used to 
                         a lotta stuff that's gonna wreck 
                         you. Why, that fifty bucks in your 
                         pocket's beginning to show up on 
                         you already. And don't pull that 
                         on me neither!
                              (as John brings out 
                              harmonica)

                                     JOHN
                         Stop worrying, Colonel. I'm gonna 
                         get my arm fixed out of this.

               WIDER SHOT: As BEANY enters scene with box of cigars.

                                     BEANY
                         Here's some cigars the boss sent 
                         up. Have one.

               JOHN's eyes light up.

                                     JOHN
                         Hey, cigars!

               He grabs one and stuffs it in his mouth.

                                     BEANY
                              (to Colonel)
                         Help yourself.

                                     COLONEL
                         Naw.

               JOHN flops into a luxurious chair—and immediately ANGELFACE 
               holds a light up for his cigar. JOHN looks up, pleased.

                                     JOHN
                         Say, I'll bet yuh even the Major 
                         Leaguers don't rate an outfit like 
                         this.

                                     ANGELFACE
                              (hands him a 
                              newspaper)
                         Here. Make yourself comfortable.
                              (turns to the Colonel)
                         Paper?

                                     COLONEL
                              (sharply)
                         I don't read no papers and I don't 
                         listen to radios either. I know 
                         the world's been shaved by a drunken 
                         barber and I don't have to read 
                         it.

               ANGELFACE backs away, puzzled.

                                     COLONEL
                              (crosses to John)
                         I've seen guys like you go under 
                         before. Guys that never had a worry. 
                         Then they got ahold of some dough 
                         and went goofy. The first thing 
                         that happens to a guy—

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, did yuh get a load of the 
                         bedroom?

                                     JOHN
                         No.

               BEANY beckons to him to follow, which JOHN does with great 
               interest.

               INT. BEDROOM

               FULL SHOT: As BEANY and JOHN puff luxuriously on their 
               cigars and examine the room.

                                     COLONEL
                              (in doorway)
                         The first thing that happens to a 
                         guy like that—he starts wantin' to 
                         go into restaurants and sit at a 
                         table and eat salads—and cup 
                         cakes—and tea—
                              (disgusted)
                         Boy, what that kinda food does to 
                         your system!

               JOHN pushes on the bed and is impressed with its softness.

                                     COLONEL
                         The next thing the dope wants is a 
                         room.  Yes sir, a room with steam 
                         heat!  And curtains and rugs and 
                         'fore you know it, he's all softened 
                         up and he can't sleep 'less he has 
                         a bed.

               CLOSE-UP: Of BEANY. He stares, bewildered, at the COLONEL.

               WIDER SHOT: JOHN turns and crosses to window.

                                     JOHN
                              (as he goes)
                         Hey, stop worrying, Colonel. Fifty 
                         bucks ain't going to ruin me.

                                     COLONEL
                         I seen plenty of fellers start out 
                         with fifty bucks and wind up with 
                         a bank account!

                                     BEANY
                              (can't stand it any 
                              more)
                         Hey, whatsa matter with a bank 
                         account, anyway?

                                     COLONEL
                              (ignoring him)
                         And let me tell you, Long John. 
                         When you become a guy with a bank 
                         account, they got you.  Yes sir, 
                         they got you!

                                     BEANY
                         Who's got him?

                                     COLONEL
                         The heelots!

                                     BEANY
                         Who?

                                     JOHN
                              (at the window)
                         Hey. There's the City Hall tower 
                         I'm supposed to jump off of. It's 
                         even higher than this.

                                     BEANY
                         Who's got him?

                                     COLONEL
                         The heelots!

               CLOSE-UP: JOHN opens window and leans out.

               CLOSE-UP: Of BEANY. His eyes pop; he's petrified.

               MED. SHOT: JOHN stretches far out of the window, and quickly 
               bounces back.

                                     JOHN
                         Wow!

               At the same time BEANY springs to his side and yanks him 
               back.

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, wait a minute!  You ain't 
                         supposed to do that till Christmas 
                         Eve! Wanta get me in a jam?

                                     JOHN
                              (twinkle in his eye)
                         If it's gonna get you in a jam, 
                         I'll do you a favor. I won't jump.

               He exits to the living room.

               INT. LIVING ROOM 

               FULL SHOT: As JOHN enters, flicking ashes from his cigar, 
               grandly, the COLONEL leaves the doorway, still pursuing 
               his point.

                                     COLONEL
                         And when they get you, you got no 
                         more chance than a road-rabbit.

                                     BEANY
                              (dogging the COLONEL)
                         Hey. Who'd you say was gonna get 
                         him?

                                     JOHN
                         Say, is this one of those places 
                         where you ring if you want 
                         something?

                                     BEANY
                         Yeah. Just use the phone.

               The thought of this delights JOHN.

                                     JOHN
                         Boy! I've always wanted to do this!

               He goes to the phone.

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, Doc, look. Look, Doc. Gimme 
                         that again, will yuh? Who's gonna 
                         get him?

                                     COLONEL
                         The heelots!

                                     BEANY
                         Who are they?

               TWO SHOT: The COLONEL finally levels off on BEANY.

                                     COLONEL
                         Listen, sucker, yuh ever been broke?

                                     BEANY
                         Sure. Mostly often.

                                     COLONEL
                         All right. You're walking along—not 
                         a nickel in your jeans—free as the 
                         wind—nobody bothers you—hundreds 
                         of people pass yuh by in every 
                         line of business—shoes, hats, 
                         automobiles, radio, furniture, 
                         everything. They're all nice, 
                         lovable people, and they let you 
                         alone. Is that right?

               CLOSE-UP: Of BEANY—nodding his head, bewildered.

                                     COLONEL'S VOICE
                         Then you get hold of some dough, 
                         and what happens?

               BEANY instinctively shakes his head.

               TWO SHOT: The COLONEL takes on a sneering expression.

                                     COLONEL
                         All those nice, sweet, lovable 
                         people become heelots. A lotta 
                         heels.
                              (mysterioso)
                         They begin creeping up on you—trying 
                         to sell you something. They've got 
                         long claws and they get a strangle-
                         hold on you—and you squirm—and 
                         duck and holler—and you try to 
                         push 'em away—but you haven't got 
                         a chance—they've got you! First 
                         thing you know, you own things. A 
                         car, for instance.

               BEANY has been following him, eyes blinking, mouth open.

                                     COLONEL
                         Now your whole life is messed up 
                         with more stuff—license fees—and 
                         number plates—and gas and oil—and 
                         taxes and insurance—

               CLOSE SHOT: Of the LUGS at the door. One of them listens 
               with a half-smile on his face. The other, more goofy, looks 
               bewildered. He has been listening—and now, slowly rises, 
               ears cocked, frightened by the harrowing tale. CAMERA 
               retreats before him—as he slowly walks nearer to BEANY and 
               the COLONEL. Meantime, we continue to hear the COLONEL'S 
               voice.

                                     COLONEL'S VOICE
                         and identification cards—and 
                         letters—and bills—and flat tires—and 
                         dents—and traffic tickets and 
                         motorcycle cops and court rooms—and 
                         lawyers—and fines—

               WIDER SHOT: The LUG steps up directly behind BEANY—and the 
               two horrified faces are close together—both staring at the 
               COLONEL.

                                     COLONEL
                         And a million and one other things. 
                         And what happens? You're not the 
                         free and happy guy you used to be. 
                         You gotta have money to pay for 
                         all those things—so you go after 
                         what the other feller's got—
                              (with finality)
                         And there you are—you're a heelot 
                         yourself!

               CLOSE SHOT: Of the two heads of BEANY and the LUG. They 
               continue to stare, wide-eyed, at the COLONEL.

               WIDER SHOT: As JOHN approaches the COLONEL.

                                     JOHN
                              (smiling)
                         You win, Colonel. Here's the fifty. 
                         Go on out and get rid of it.

                                     COLONEL
                              (as he goes)
                         You bet I will! As fast as I can!  
                         Gonna get some canned goods—a 
                         fishing rod, and the rest I'm gonna 
                         give away.

                                     ANGELFACE
                              (aghast)
                         Give away?

                                     JOHN
                              (calling)
                         Hey. Get me a pitcher's glove! Got 
                         to get some practice.

                                     ANGELFACE
                         Say, he's giving it away! I'm gonna 
                         get me some of that!

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, come back here, yuh heelot!

                                     JOHN
                              (on the phone)
                         Will you send up five hamburgers 
                         with all the trimmings, five 
                         chocolate ice cream sodas, and 
                         five pieces of apple pie? No, apple, 
                         with cheese. Yeah. Thank you.

               JOHN hangs up.

               The COLONEL has just reached the door when it flies open 
               and Ann comes in with photographer EDDIE—she sees JOHN all 
               dressed up.

                                     ANN
                         Hello there. Well, well! If it 
                         isn't the man about town!

                                     EDDIE
                         All set, Ann?

                                     ANN
                              (coming out of it)
                         Huh? Oh, yes. Let's go.
                              (she backs away)
                         Now, let's see. We want some action 
                         in these pictures.

                                     JOHN
                         Action?

                                     ANN
                         Um-hum.

               JOHN winds up in pitching pose—his left leg lifted up high.

                                     EDDIE
                         That's good.

                                     ANN
                         No, no, no. This man's going to 
                         jump off a roof.

                                     EDDIE
                         Oh.

                                     ANN
                         Here. Wait a minute. Let me comb 
                         your hair. Sit down. There. That's 
                         better.

               CLOSE SHOT: She combs his hair—straightens his tie—etc. He 
               inhales the fragrance of her hair and likes it—winks to 
               the others. She poses JOHN's face and looks it over.

                                     ANN
                         You know, he's got a nice face, 
                         hasn't he?

                                     ANGELFACE
                         Yeh—he's pretty.

               JOHN gives him a look and starts to get up slowly.

                                     ANN
                         Here. Sit down!
                              (to ANGELFACE)
                         Quiet, egghead!
                              (back to JOHN)
                         All right, now, a serious 
                         expression.

                                     JOHN
                              (laughing)
                         Can't. I'm feeling too good.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, come on, now. This is serious. 
                         You're a man disgusted with all of 
                         civilization.

                                     JOHN
                         With all of it?

                                     ANN
                         Yes, you're sore at the world. 
                         Come on, now.

                                     JOHN
                         Oh, crabby guy, huh?

               He tries scowling.

                                     ANN
                         Yeah. No, no!
                              (laughing)
                         No! No, look. You don't have to 
                         smell the world!
                              (the men laugh)

                                     JOHN
                         Well, all those guys in the 
                         bleachers think—

                                     ANN
                         Never mind those guys. All right, 
                         stand up. Now let's see what you 
                         look like when you protest.

                                     JOHN
                         Against what?

                                     ANN
                         Against anything. Just protest.

                                     JOHN
                              (laughing)
                         You got me.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, look. I'm the umpire, and you 
                         just cut the heart of the plate 
                         with your fast one and I call it a 
                         ball. What would you do?

                                     JOHN
                              (advances toward 
                              her)
                         Oh, yuh did, huh?

                                     ANN
                         Yes!

                                     JOHN
                         Why can't you call right, you bone-
                         headed, pig-eared, lop-eared, pot-
                         bellied—

                                     ANN
                         Grab it, Eddie, grab it!

               Eddie takes the picture.

               A MONTAGE: OF NEWSPAPER INSERTS FEATURING JOHN DOE'S 
               PICTURE.

               "I protest against collapse of decency in the world." "I 
               protest against corruption in local politics." "I protest 
               against civic heads being in league with crime."  "I protest 
               against state relief being used as political football." "I 
               protest against County Hospitals shutting out the needy." 
               "I protest against all the brutality and slaughter in the 
               world."

               CLOSE-UP: SUPERIMPOSED over all of the above is a 
               CIRCULATION CHART—showing the circulation of the Bulletin 
               in a constant rise.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. GOVERNOR'S STUDY 

               MED. SHOT: The GOVERNOR paces furiously. In front of him 
               are several associates.

                                     GOVERNOR
                         I don't care whose picture they're 
                         publishing. I still say that this 
                         John Doe person is a myth. And you 
                         can quote me on that. And I'm going 
                         to insist on his being produced 
                         for questioning. You know as well 
                         as I do that this whole thing is 
                         being engineered by a vicious man 
                         with a vicious purpose—Mr. D. B. 
                         Norton.

               As he finishes saying this, 

                                                            DISSOLVE TO:

               EXT. D. B.'S ESTATE

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. NORTON. Camera pulls back and we find 
               him on horseback.

               REVERSE LONG SHOT: We discover that he is watching the 
               maneuvers of a motorcycle corps who are in uniform. They 
               are being drilled by TED SHELDON.

               MED. SHOT: As a groom rides toward D. B.

                                     GROOM
                         Mr. Connell and Miss Mitchell are 
                         at the house, sir.

                                     D. B.
                         Oh, they are? All right, come on.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. D. B. 'S STUDY

               MED. SHOT—PANNING: As ANN, D. B. and CONNELL enter and 
               cross to D. B. 's desk.

                                     ANN
                              (as they walk)
                         Personally, I think it's just plain 
                         stupidity to drop it now.

               They reach D. B. 's desk and stop.

                                     ANN
                         You should see his fan mail!  
                         Thousands! Why, it's going over 
                         like a house afire!

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. He studies her a moment before he turns 
               to CONNELL.

                                     D. B.
                         What are you afraid of, Connell? 
                         It's doubled our circulation.

               WIDER SHOT: To include all three.

                                     CONNELL
                         Yeah, but it's got everybody sore. 
                         Ads are being pulled—the Governor's 
                         starting a libel suit—what's more, 
                         they all know John Doe's a 
                         phoney—and they insist on seeing 
                         him.

                                     ANN
                         Well, what about it?  Let them see 
                         him!  We'll go them one better. 
                         They can also hear him.
                              (to D. B.)
                         You own a radio station, Mr. Norton. 
                         Why not put him on the air?

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. He admires her fight.

                                     CONNELL'S VOICE
                         Watch out for this dame, D. B. 
                         She'll drive you batty!

                                     ANN
                         Ohh!

               WIDER SHOT: To include all three.

                                     CONNELL
                         Look. We can't let 'em get to this 
                         bush-league pitcher and start 
                         pumping him. Good night!  No telling 
                         what that screwball might do. I 
                         walked in yesterday—here he is, 
                         standing on a table with a fishing 
                         pole flycasting. Take my advice 
                         and get him out of town before 
                         this thing explodes in our faces!

                                     ANN
                         If you do, Mr. Norton, you're just 
                         as much of a dumb cluck as he is! 
                         Excuse me.

                                     CONNELL
                              (to Ann—hotly)
                         No, you've got yourself a meal 
                         ticket and you hate to let go.

                                     ANN
                         Sure, it's a meal ticket for me. I 
                         admit it, but it's also a windfall 
                         for somebody like Mr. Norton who's 
                         trying to crash national politics.
                              (she turns to D. B.)
                         That's what you bought the newspaper 
                         for, isn't it? You wanta reach a 
                         lotta people, don't you?  Well, 
                         put John Doe on the air and you 
                         can reach a hundred and fifty 
                         million of 'em. He can say anything 
                         he wants and they'll listen to 
                         him.

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. Fascinated by ANN.

               WIDER SHOT: CONNELL stares at her derisively. D. B. is 
               completely absorbed.

                                     ANN
                         All right, let's not forget the 
                         Governor, the Mayor and all small 
                         fry like that. This can arouse 
                         national interest! If he made a 
                         hit around here—he can do it 
                         everywhere else in the country! 
                         And you'll be pulling the strings, 
                         Mr. Norton!

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. His eyes have begun to light up with 
               extensive plans.

               WIDER SHOT: D. B. continues to study ANN with deep interest. 
               Then he turns to CONNELL.

                                     D. B.
                         Go down to the office and arrange 
                         for some radio time.

                                     CONNELL
                              (protesting)
                         Why, D. B., you're not going to 
                         fall for—

                                     D. B.
                              (interrupting sharply)
                         I want it as soon as possible.

                                     CONNELL
                              (shrugging)
                         Okay. I just came in to get warm, 
                         myself. Come on, let's go.

               He starts out. ANN picks up her bag, prepared to follow 
               CONNELL.

                                     D. B.
                         Er, don't you go. I want to talk 
                         to you.

               CONNELL goes. ANN waits, somewhat nervously.

                                     D. B.
                              (when CONNELL is 
                              gone)
                         Sit down.

               MED. TWO SHOT: ANN and D. B. D. B. studies her for a moment.

                                     D. B.
                         . . . Er, this John Doe idea is 
                         yours, huh?

                                     ANN
                         Yes, sir.

                                     D. B.
                         How much money do you get?

                                     ANN
                         Thirty dollars.

                                     D. B.
                              (probingly)
                         Thirty dollars? Well, er, what are 
                         you after? I mean, what do you 
                         want? A journalistic career?

                                     ANN
                         Money.

                                     D. B.
                              (laughs)
                         Money?  Well, I'm glad to hear 
                         somebody admit it. Do you suppose 
                         you could write a radio speech 
                         that would put that fellow over?

                                     ANN
                         Oh, I'm sure I can.

                                     D. B.
                         Do it, and I'll give you a hundred 
                         dollars a week.

                                     ANN
                         A hundred dollars!

                                     D. B.
                         That's only the beginning. You 
                         play your cards right and you'll 
                         never have to worry about money 
                         again. Oh, I knew it.

               ANN'S eyes brighten with excitement. They are interrupted 
               by the arrival of TED SHELDON, in uniform.

                                     D. B.
                              (to TED)
                         Hello. Whenever there's a pretty 
                         woman around, er—
                              (laughing)
                         This is my nephew, Ted Sheldon, 
                         Miss Mitchell.

                                     ANN
                         How do you do.

                                     TED
                         How do you do!

                                     D. B.
                         All right, Casanova. I'll give you 
                         a break. See that Miss Mitchell 
                         gets a car to take her home.

                                     TED
                         Always reading my mind, aren't 
                         you?

                                     ANN
                              (laughing)
                         Thank you very much for everything.

                                     D. B.
                         And, Miss Mitchell—I think from 
                         now on you'd better work directly 
                         with me.

                                     ANN
                         Yes, sir.

               They exit. D. B. walks to the door, a pleased expression 
               on his face.

               CLOSE-UP: Of D. B. His face wreathed in a victorious smile.

                                                               FADE-OUT:

               FADE IN:

               INT. ANNE'S LIVING ROOM

               CLOSE SHOT: Of ANN. She sits at a typewriter reading 
               something she has written. Suddenly, impulsively, she yanks 
               the sheet out of the machine and flings it to the floor.  
               As she rises, camera pulls back. We find the floor littered 
               with previously unsuccessful attempts to get the speech 
               written. For a moment, ANN paces agitatedly, until she is 
               interrupted by a commotion.

               MED. SHOT: At door. ANN's two sisters, IRENE and ELLEN, 
               aged nine and eleven—and dressed in their sleeping pajamas, 
               dash in, squealing mischievously. Camera pans with them as 
               they rush to ANN and leap on her.

                                     ANN
                         Oh! Hey! Oh, hey! I thought you 
                         were asleep!

                                     ELLEN
                         We just wanted to say good night, 
                         Sis.

               They embrace and kiss her.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, oh! Oh, you little brats! You're 
                         just stalling. I said good night!

               MED. SHOT: At door. ANN'S MOTHER appears in the doorway. 
               She is a prim little woman—her clothes have a touch of the 
               Victorian about them—her hair is done up in old-fashioned 
               style, her throat is modestly covered in lace.

                                     MOTHER
                              (above the din)
                         Come, come, come, children. It's 
                         past your bedtime.

                                     ELLEN
                         Oh, all right.

                                     MOTHER
                         Go on!

                                     ELLEN
                         Come on, Pooch! Come on, come on.

                                     MOTHER
                         Now, keep Pooch off the bed.

               The CHILDREN exit, squealing. ANN'S MOTHER goes to ANN's 
               desk and searches for something.

                                     ANN
                         Stick a fork through me! I'm done. 
                         I'll never get this speech right.

                                     MOTHER
                         Oh, yes you will, Ann dear . . . 
                         you're very clever.

                                     ANN
                         Yeah, I know. What are you looking 
                         for?

                                     MOTHER
                         Your purse. I need ten dollars.

                                     ANN
                         What for? I gave you fifty just 
                         the other day.

                                     MOTHER
                         Yes, I know, dear, but Mrs. Burke 
                         had her baby yesterday. Nine pounds! 
                         And there wasn't a thing in the 
                         house—and then this morning the 
                         Community Chest lady came around 
                         and—

                                     ANN
                         And the fifty's all gone, huh? 
                         Who's the ten for?

                                     MOTHER
                         The Websters.

                                     ANN
                         The Websters!

                                     MOTHER
                         You remember those lovely people 
                         your father used to take care of?  
                         I thought I'd buy them some 
                         groceries. Oh, Ann, dear, it's a 
                         shame, those poor—

                                     ANN
                         You're marvelous, Ma. You're just 
                         like Father used to be. Do you 
                         realize a couple of weeks ago we 
                         didn't have enough to eat ourselves?

                                     MOTHER
                         Well, yes, I know, dear, but these 
                         people are in such need and we 
                         have plenty now.

                                     ANN
                         If you're thinking of that thousand 
                         dollars, forget it. It's practically 
                         gone. We owed everybody in town.  
                         Now, you've just gotta stop giving 
                         all your money away.

               Her MOTHER looks up, surprised at her tone.

                                     MRS. MITCHELL
                         Oh, Ann, dear!

               CLOSE-UP: ANN realizes she has spoken sharply to her MOTHER 
               and immediately regrets it. Her face softens.

               MED. SHOT: As ANN crosses to her MOTHER—and places an arm 
               around her shoulder, tenderly.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, I'm sorry, Ma. Oh, don't pay 
                         any attention to me. I guess I'm 
                         just upset about all this. Gee 
                         whiz, here I am with a great 
                         opportunity to get somewhere, to 
                         give us security for once in our 
                         lives, and I'm stuck. If I could 
                         put this over, your Mrs. Burke can 
                         have six babies!

                                     MOTHER
                         Do you mean the speech you're 
                         writing?

                                     ANN
                         Yeah, I don't know. I simply can't 
                         get it to jell!  I created somebody 
                         who's gonna give up his life for a 
                         principle, hundreds of thousands 
                         of people are gonna listen to him 
                         over the radio and, unless he says 
                         something that's, well, that's 
                         sensational, it's just no good!

                                     MOTHER
                         Well, honey, of course I don't 
                         know what kind of a speech you're 
                         trying to write, but judging from 
                         the samples I've read, I don't 
                         think anybody'll listen.

                                     ANN
                         What?

                                     MOTHER
                         Darling, there are so many 
                         complaining political speeches.  
                         People are tired of hearing nothing 
                         but doom and despair on the radio. 
                         If you're going to have him say 
                         anything, why don't you let him 
                         say something simple and real, 
                         something with hope in it? If your 
                         father were alive, he'd know what 
                         to say.

                                     ANN
                         Oh, yes, Father certainly would.

                                     MOTHER
                         Wait a minute . . .

                                     ANN
                         Huh?

               MRS. MITCHELL crosses to a desk, finds a key and unlocks a 
               compartment. ANN watches her, curiously.

               CLOSE SHOT: MRS. MITCHELL extracts a diary from the 
               compartment, which she handles very tenderly.

               CAMERA PANS with her as she goes back to ANN.

                                     MOTHER
                         That's your father's diary, Ann.

                                     ANN
                         Father's . . . I never knew he had 
                         a diary.

                                     MOTHER
                         There's enough in it for a hundred 
                         speeches, things people ought to 
                         hear nowadays. You be careful of 
                         it, won't you dear?  It's always 
                         helped keep your father alive for 
                         me.

                                     ANN
                              (holds MOTHER's 
                              hand to her cheek)
                         You bet I will, Ma.

               Her mother abruptly leaves.

               CLOSE-UP: ANN turns her attention to the diary. As she 
               opens it, her eyes sparkle expectantly. She becomes 
               interested in the first thing she sees.

                                                           DISSOLVE TO: 

               INT. CORRIDOR OF HOTEL

               MED. SHOT: At door of JOHN's suite. A crowd of people are 
               around the door trying to crash it. The LUG on guard stands 
               before the door.

                                     LUG
                         Wait a minute. John Doe don't wanta 
                         sign no autographs.

                                     INQUIRER
                         Well, what does he do all day?

                                     LUG
                         What does he do all day?  He's 
                         writin' out his memories!

                                                                CUT TO: 

               INT. LIVING ROOM

               MED. SHOT: BEANY is on the telephone. He is apparently 
               weary from answering them all day.

                                     BEANY
                         Sorry, lady. you can't see Mr. 
                         Doe. He wants to be alone. No, no, 
                         he just sits around all day and 
                         commutes with himself.

               CAMERA SWINGS around to JOHN. He stands in the middle of 
               the floor, his pitcher's glove on, playing an imaginary 
               game of ball. He winds up and throws an imaginary ball.

               CLOSE-UP: Of the COLONEL. He wears a catcher's mitt—and 
               smacks it as if he just caught the ball.

                                     BEANY
                              (umpiring)
                         Ba-ll!

                                     COLONEL
                         I don't know how you're gonna stand 
                         it around here till after Christmas.

               FULL SHOT: At the door are the two LUGS, watching the 
               imaginary ball game. The COLONEL takes a couple of steps 
               over home plate, and throws the "ball" back to JOHN who 
               picks it up out of the air.

                                     COLONEL
                              (as he steps back 
                              behind the plate)
                         I betcha yuh ain't heard a train 
                         whistle in two weeks.

               He crouches on his knees—and gives JOHN a signal.

                                     BEANY
                         St-rike!

                                     COLONEL
                         I know why you're hangin' 
                         around—you're stuck on a girl—that's 
                         all a guy needs is to get hooked 
                         up with a woman.

               CLOSE SHOT: Of JOHN. He shakes his head, and waits for 
               another sign. When he gets it, he nods. He steps onto the 
               mound—winds up and lets another one go. This is apparently 
               a hit, for his eyes shoot skyward, and he quickly 
               turns—watching the progress of the ball as it is flung to 
               first base. From his frown we know the man is safe.

               CLOSE SHOT: Of the two LUGS, ANGELFACE and MIKE. ANGELFACE 
               is seriously absorbed in the game. MIKE leans against the 
               wall, eyes narrowed, a plan going on in his head.

                                     ANGELFACE
                              (seriously)
                         What was that? A single?

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN.

                                     JOHN
                              (explaining)
                         The first baseman dropped the ball.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANGELFACE.

                                     ANGELFACE
                              (shouting at 
                              "firstbaseman")
                         Butterfingers!
                              (back to John)
                         That's tough luck, Pal.

               MED. SHOT: JOHN disregards him completely. He is too much 
               absorbed with the man on first. He now has the stance of a 
               pitch without the windup.

                                     COLONEL
                         When a guy has a woman on his 
                         hands—the first thing he knows his 
                         life is balled up with a lot more 
                         things—furniture and—

               CLOSE SHOT: Of JOHN. He catches the "ball"—gets into 
               position—nods to his catcher—raises his hands in the air, 
               takes a peek toward first base—and suddenly wheels around 
               FACING CAMERA, and whips the "ball" toward first base. 
               Almost immediately his face lights up.

               CLOSE-UP: Of ANGELFACE.

                                     ANGELFACE
                         Did you get him?

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN. He winks.

                                     BEANY
                              (umpiring)
                         You're out!

               FULL SHOT: JOHN flips the glove off his hand so that it 
               dangles from his wrist—and massages the ball with his two 
               palms.

                                     ANGELFACE
                         That's swell! What's this—the end 
                         of the eighth?

                                     JOHN
                         Ninth!

               He steps into the "pitcher's box".

               WIDER SHOT: Just as they take their positions, the LUG, 
               from outside, partly opens the door.

                                     LUG
                         Hey, Beany!  There's a coupla lugs 
                         from the Chronicle snooping around 
                         out here!

               BEANY immediately comes from background.

                                     BEANY
                         Come on, Angelface! Gangway!

               As they reach the door, the LUG speaks to ANGELFACE.

                                     LUG
                         What's the score, Angelface?

                                     ANGELFACE
                         Three to two—our favor.

                                     LUG
                         Gee, that's great!

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN. He has heard this and grins 
               mischievously. He starts winding up for another pitch.

               CLOSE-UP: Of MIKE. He looks around mischievously, then 
               turns to JOHN.

                                     MIKE
                         You've got swell form. Must have 
                         been a pretty good pitcher.

               WIDER SHOT: JOHN is just receiving the ball.

                                     JOHN
                         Pretty good?  Say, I was just about 
                         ready for the major leagues when I 
                         chipped a bone in my elbow. I got 
                         it pitchin' a nineteen-inning game!

                                     MIKE
                         Nineteen!

                                     JOHN
                         Yep. There was a major league scout 
                         there watching me, too. And he 
                         came down after the game with a 
                         contract. Do you know what?  I 
                         couldn't life my arm to sign it. 
                         But I'll be okay again as soon as 
                         I get it fixed up.

                                     MIKE
                              (picks up 
                              newspaper—sighing)
                         That's too bad.

                                     JOHN
                         What do you mean, too bad?

                                     MIKE
                              (pretending 
                              distraction)
                         Huh? Oh, that you'll never be able 
                         to play again.

                                     JOHN
                         Well, what are you talking about? 
                         I just told you I was gonna get a—

                                     MIKE
                              (interrupting 
                              carelessly)
                         Well, you know how they are in 
                         baseball—if a guy's mixed up in a 
                         racket—

                                     JOHN
                              (walking over)
                         Racket? What do you mean?

                                     MIKE
                         Well, I was just thinking about 
                         this John Doe business. Why, as 
                         soon as it comes out it's all a 
                         fake, you'll be washed up in 
                         baseball, won't you?

                                     JOHN
                         Y-yeah. Gee, doggone it, I never 
                         thought about that. Gosh!

                                     MIKE
                         And another thing, what about all 
                         the kids in the country, the kids 
                         that idolize ball players? What 
                         are they gonna think about you?
                              (shakes his head)
                         Close shot: Of the COLONEL. He has 
                         dropped his glove—flopped into a 
                         chair—and has taken out his ocarina.

                                     JOHN'S VOICE
                         Hey, did you hear that, Colonel?

               The COLONEL nods, disinterestedly, and begins to play.

               WIDER SHOT: JOHN ponders his dilemma for a second.

                                     JOHN
                         I gotta figure some way out of 
                         this thing!

                                     COLONEL
                         The elevators are still runnin'.

                                     MIKE
                              (carelessly)
                         I know one way you can do it.

                                     JOHN
                         How?

                                     MIKE
                         Well, when you get up on the radio, 
                         all you have to do is say the whole 
                         thing's a frame-up. Make you a 
                         hero sure as you're born!

               John thinks this over, but something troubles him.

                                     JOHN
                         Yeah, but how am I gonna get my 
                         arm fixed?

                                     MIKE
                         Well, that's a cinch. I know 
                         somebody that'll give you five 
                         thousand dollars just to get up on 
                         the radio and tell the truth.

                                     COLONEL
                              (eyes popping)
                         Five thousand dollars?

                                     MIKE
                         Yeah. Five thousand dollars. And 
                         he gets it right away. You don't 
                         have to wait till Christmas.

                                     COLONEL
                         Look out, Long John! They're closing 
                         in on you!

                                     JOHN
                              (ignores COLONEL)
                         Say, who's putting up this dough?

                                     MIKE
                         Feller runs the Chronicle .
                              (takes it out of 
                              his pocket)
                         Here's the speech you make—and 
                         it's all written out for you.

               JOHN takes it.

               CLOSE-UP: Of the COLONEL.

                                     COLONEL
                              (eyes heaven-ward)
                         Five thousand dollars! Holy 
                         mackerel! I can see the heelots 
                         comin'. The whole army of them!

                                     MIKE
                         It's on the level.

               CLOSE-UP: Of JOHN.

                                                            DISSOLVE TO:

               INT. BROADCASTING STATION

               CLOSE SHOT: TELEPHONE OPERATORS.

                                     1ST GIRL
                         No, I'm sorry. Tickets for the 
                         broadcast are all gone. Phone the 
                         Bulletin.

                                     2ND GIRL
                         Sorry. No more tickets left.

               MED. SHOT: Crowd chattering—they recognize JOHN DOE coming 
               in.

               CLOSE SHOT: At a side door in broadcasting station. As the 
               COLONEL and MIKE take their places.

               INT. OFFICE IN BROADCASTING STATION

               FULL SHOT: JOHN is led by BEANY into the office. They are 
               immediately followed by several photographers.

                                     BEANY
                         Here he is.

                                     ANN
                         Hello, John. All set for the big 
                         night? Swell!

                                     PHOTOGRAPHER
                         Turn around.

                                     2ND PHOTOGRAPHER
                         One moment—hold it! Now stand still, 
                         Mr. Doe.

                                     ANN
                         Okay, Beany, take them outside.

               TWO SHOT: JOHN and ANN.

                                     ANN
                         Now, look, John. Here's the speech. 
                         It's in caps and double-spaced.  
                         You won't have any trouble reading 
                         it. Not nervous, are you?

                                     JOHN
                         No.

                                     ANN
                         Of course not. He wouldn't be.

                                     JOHN
                         Who?

                                     ANN
                         John Doe. The one in there.
                              (pointing to speech)

                                     BEANY
                         Hey, don't let your knees rattle. 
                         It picks up on the mike!

                                     ANN
                         Oh, Beany! You needn't be nervous, 
                         John. All you have to remember is 
                         to be sincere.

               WIDER SHOT: Man pokes his head in.

                                     MAN
                         Pick up the phone, Miss Mitchell. 
                         It's for you.

                                     ANN
                              (takes phone)
                         Hello? Yes, Mother. Oh, thank you, 
                         darling.

               FULL SHOT: While she speaks on the phone, MRS. BREWSTER 
               barges in, accompanied by two other ladies.

                                     MRS. BREWSTER
                         Oh, there he is, the poor, dear 
                         man! Oh, good luck to you, Mr. 
                         Doe. We want you to know that we're 
                         all for you. The girls all decided 
                         that you're not to jump off any 
                         roof a'tall. Oh, we'll stop it!

               ANN completes the phone call—crosses to MRS. BREWSTER.

                                     ANN
                         Sorry, ladies. Mr. Doe can't be 
                         bothered now. He's gotta make a 
                         speech out there, and—

               While she gets them out—MIKE slips into the room.

               CLOSE SHOT: MIKE and JOHN.

                                     MIKE
                         Have you got the speech I gave 
                         you?

                                     JOHN
                              (taps breast pocket)
                         Yeah.

                                     MIKE
                         Now, look. I'll give this money to 
                         the Colonel just as soon as you 
                         get started. We'll have a car 
                         waiting at the side entrance for 
                         you.

                                     JOHN
                         Okay.

               FULL SHOT: ANN turns away from the door.

                                     ANN
                              (to MIKE)
                         How'd you get in here?

                                     MIKE
                         Huh? Oh, I just came in to wish 
                         him luck.

                                     ANN
                         Come on, out. Out!
                              (turning to John)
                         Mother says good luck, too. John, 
                         when you read that speech, please, 
                         please believe every word of it. 
                         He's turned out to be a wonderful 
                         person, John.

                                     JOHN
                         Who?

                                     ANN
                         John Doe, the one in the speech.

                                     JOHN
                         Oh. Yeah.

                                     ANN
                         You know something? I've actually 
                         fallen in love with him.

               FULL SHOT: They are interrupted by the arrival of CONNELL. 
               He is accompanied by several photographers—and a beautiful 
               girl in a bathing suit. A banner across her front reads: 
               "Miss Average Girl".

                                     CONNELL
                         All right, there he is, sister. 
                         Now, come on—plenty of oomph!

               The GIRL, all smiles, throws her arms around JOHN's 
               shoulder—and strikes a languid pose. The flashlights go 
               off.

                                     ANN
                         What's the idea?

                                     CONNELL
                         No, no, no. Now that's too much!

                                     PHOTOGRAPHER
                         One moment, please.

                                     ANN
                         This is no time for cheap publicity, 
                         Mr. Connell!

                                     CONNELL
                         Listen. If that guy lays an egg. I 
                         want to get something out of it. 
                         I'm getting a Jane Doe ready!

                                     ANN
                              (trying to get rid 
                              of them)
                         That's fine, honey. Now, get out!

                                     PHOTOGRAPHER
                         All right. I need one more.

                                     ANN
                         Go right ahead.

               While there is this confusion, the COLONEL pushes in and 
               stands in the doorway.

                                     COLONEL
                         How're you doin'?

                                     CONNELL
                              (calls to Beany 
                              outside)
                         All right, Beany—bring 'em in!

               While CONNELL speaks, two MIDGETS push the COLONEL out of 
               the way and enter the room. The COLONEL glances down—and 
               nearly jumps out of his skin. BEANY follows them in.

                                     COLONEL
                         Holy smoke! A half a heelot!

                                     BEANY
                         There you are, Boss, just like you 
                         ordered. Symbols of the little 
                         people.

                                     CONNELL
                         Okay. Get them up.

               BEANY lifts them and places them, one on each of JOHN's 
               arms. The flashlights go off.

                                     ANN
                         This is ridiculous, Mr. Connell! 
                         Come on, give him a chance. The 
                         man's on the air!

               While she speaks, she tries to shove the photographers 
               out.

                                     BOY MIDGET
                              (to girl midget)
                         Come on, Snooks—you better bail 
                         out.

                                     GIRL MIDGET
                              (coquettishly)
                         Goodbye, Mr. Doe!

               BEANY lifts her off—and ANN pushes them all out—just as 
               the STAGE MANAGER reappears.

                                     STAGE MANAGER
                         Better get ready. One minute to 
                         go!

               TWO SHOT: JOHN and ANN. ANN turns quickly to JOHN.

                                     ANN
                         Wow!  One minute to go, and the 
                         score is nothing to nothing! Now, 
                         please, John, you won't let me 
                         down, will you? Will you?  'Course 
                         you won't. If you'll just think of 
                         yourself as the real John Doe.  
                         Listen. Everything in that speech 
                         are things a certain man believed 
                         in. He was my father, John. And 
                         when he talked, people listened. 
                         They'll listen to you, too.
                         Funny—you know what my mother said 
                         the other night? She said to look 
                         into your eyes—that I'd see Father 
                         there.

                                     STAGE MANAGER
                         Hey—what do you say?

                                     ANN
                         Okay! We're coming. Come on!  Now, 
                         listen, John. You're a pitcher. 
                         Now, get in there and pitch!
                              (kisses his cheek)
                         Good luck.

               For a moment he just stares at her, under a spell. Then, 
               turning, he exits. After a second of watching him, ANN 
               follows.

                                     STUDIO OFFICIAL
                         Give him room, let him through. 
                         Come on.

               Int. broadcasting stage: Med. shot: Camera retreats in 
               front of JOHN and the official, as they leave the office 
               and proceed to the microphones. Everyone stares curiously 
               at JOHN—whispering to each other.

               MED. SHOT: Shooting through glass partition, toward control 
               booth. We SEE the TWO MEN at the board. They glance 
               nervously at their watches—then at the clock on the wall.

               CLOSE SHOT: Of ANN. She has taken a position at a table 
               near the mike. Next to her sits CONNELL. ANN watches JOHN 
               with intense interest.

               The COLONEL has followed JOHN up to the microphone.

                                     COLONEL
                              (to John)
                         Hey. Let's get out o' here. There's 
                         the door right there.

                                     M.C.
                         Hey, what're you doing here?

                                     COLONEL
                         That's what I'd like to know!

                                     M.C.
                         Come on, out. Out.

                                     JOHN
                         Say, he's a friend of mine.

                                     ANN
                              (at John's elbow)
                         Never mind. Let him alone. He's 
                         all right. I'll be right over there 
                         pulling for you.

               JOHN starts to follow ANN away from mike. ANN leads him 
               back to mike again.

                                     ANN
                         No, John—over here.

                                     2ND M.C.
                         Stand by.

               MED. SHOT: At door. The COLONEL surreptitiously tries the 
               door, to see that it opens readily. Standing near him is 
               BEANY and the others.

               MED. SHOT: Group around SPENCER. They wait expectantly. 
               Their eyes sparkling with excitement.

                                     SPENCER
                         Phone the Chronicle . Tell 'em to 
                         start getting those extras out.

               MED. SHOT: Toward control booth. The man with the earphones 
               on has his hand up ready to give the signal. He listens a 
               moment, then abruptly drops his hand.

               CLOSE-UP: The man near the announcer throws his HAND up as 
               a SIGNAL to someone off scene.

               MED. SHOT: An orchestra in a corner. The conductor waves 
               his baton—and the orchestra blasts out a dramatic fanfare.

               CLOSE SHOT: ANNOUNCER and JOHN. ANNOUNCER holds his script 
               up and the moment the music stops he speaks dramatically.

                                     ANNOUNCER
                              (rapid-fire)
                         And good evening, ladies and 
                         gentlemen. This is Kenneth Frye, 
                         speaking for the New Bulletin . 
                         Tonight we give you something 
                         entirely new and different. Standing 
                         beside me is the young m